1、 - 1 - Unit2 Travelling around 本单元的写作任务是读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件后， 给朋友写一封介绍旅行计 划的电子邮件。 .Pre-writing ()Learning to write after the model Dear Xiao Li， My time here in China is going well.I love my new school and classmates.Over the October holiday，my parents and I are planning to go to Xian to see the Terr
2、acotta Army.Ive heard that it is an amazing sight，and I cant wait to go.To me the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.Its amazing that there are more than 8，000 statues，and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s. Were also planning to visit several other places in Xia
3、n.My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum，because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”！Were also going to the Xian City Wall and a few other famous sights. Were taking the train，leaving the day before the O
4、ctober holiday begins.Were arriving at 9：30 am and will start sightseeing right away，so I hope we sleep well on the train! I guess thats all for now！Ill write again soon and send photos！Do you have any plans for the coming holiday？Hope to hear from you soon. Your friend， Richard ()Preparation for wr
5、itingWords and phrases take advantage of 利用 as follows 如下 take a tour 游览 set out/off 出发 a seven-day trip 七日游 enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景 leave for 动身去某地 together with 和一起 - 2 - around the corner 即将来临 take a bus 乘公共汽车 .While-writing 假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封 e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。 要点： 1.元月 21 日下午 2
6、 点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海， 到上海后入住预订酒店， 休息一晚。 2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。 3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。 4.元月 24 日乘坐高铁返回。 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.词数 100 左右。 参考词汇：high speed railway 高铁 book 预订 Disneyland 迪士尼乐园 recreation facilities 游乐设施 souvenir纪念品 Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tow
7、er 东方明珠 Step 1 List the outline of the passage. Paragraph 1：I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family. Paragraph 2：What we shall do every day while in Shanghai. Paragraph 3：How about the plan for your winter holiday? Step 2 List the words，phrases and sentences. 1.Words and phrases book
8、vt. 预订 check in 登记 in advance 提前 at the same time 同时 a four-day trip 四天的旅行 2.Sentences 随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as) As the winter holiday is coming，I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family. 到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的 精力去参观上海。(so that) Upon arriving in Shanghai，we will check
9、 in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance，so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai. 下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。(from which) - 3 - We will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon， from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai. Step 3 Draft t
10、he article by using the following words. as，so that，besides，from which Dear Li Hua， How is everything going? As the winter holiday is coming，I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.Here is my plan. We are leaving Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2：00 p.m.on Jan.
11、21st.Upon arriving in Shanghai，we will check in the hotel for a good rest first，which will be booked online in advance，so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai.On the second day，we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities，and buy some souvenirs at the s
12、ame time.On the third day，we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning.Besides，we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon，from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.On Jan.24th， we will take the high speed railway back to Liling. How about the plan for yo
13、ur winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Wang Ming .Post-writingpolishing the passage Exchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points. 1.Is there a clear purpose for the trip? 2.Does each paragraph have a clear main idea? 3.Does the writer use t
14、he present continuous tense for future plans? 4.Does the writer use commas，stops，and question marks correctly? 5.Are all the words spelt correctly? 6.Are all the proper nouns capitalised? 写作要点 Time and travel destination： - 4 - Over the October holiday， my parents and I are planning to go to Xian to
15、 see the Terracotta Army. Some other places of interest：My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum.We are also going to the Xian City Wall and a few other famous sights. Means of transport：Were taking the train，leaving the day before the October holiday begins. 亮点表达
16、 1.旅游计划 My travel plan is as follows. 我的旅行计划如下。 Here/Below is my travel plan. 这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。 Winter holiday is coming.I have a plan for it. 寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。 2.旅游目的地 This month，I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends，which is supposed to be a seven-day trip. 这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游
17、，这应该是一次七日游。 Im planning to travel to Suzhou，a city called Eastern Venice. 我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。 The May Day is coming/approaching，and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery. 五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它美丽的风景。 3.动身及交通工具 Im planning to go there by train and come back by bus. 我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车
18、回来。 We will set out on 10th June. - 5 - 我们将于 6 月 10 日出发。 写作技巧 增加亮词的“出镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇 阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇， 也就是平常所说的“第一反应词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。 现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背到 的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生词汇。 因此同学们要做的事情就是迅速扩大消 极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。 很多同学作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复用初中学过的简单词汇， 背了大量的亮词妙语 而不用。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们 平时常讲的“头脑风暴法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful”， 那么在下笔时， 要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达， 如“attractive”或“charming”等。 再如表达“困 难的”时，大家常用“difficult”，那是不是用“tough”或“challenging”更与众不同呢？