1、05 05 社会名人社会名人 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 素材储备与写作指导素材储备与写作指导 看到关于著名人物的话题，首先要确立哪些人属于著名人物:伟人、著名影视明星、敬星、作家、运动 员等。跟前两个主题不同的是，著名人物有时是一个人，有时是个团体即多人。学生普遍会写他们最崇拜 的名人、最喜欢的明星、团体给予他们的精神支持和启迪。 实践案例实践案例 题目题目 My favorite idol 审题审题 看题目是全命题作文，重点阐述 why he 1 she is your favorite idol. 段落结构段
2、落结构 My favorite idol 应该是夹叙夹议的文章，因为作者写的 idol 对读者来讲可能不熟悉，所以可以对 idol 有些外貌描写，让读着有一个形象上的认识。接着，可以写这个 idol 身上特有的些品质，值得作者学习的 地方，突出 favorite. 核心语汇核心语汇 have influence on 对.有影响力 take a great interest in.对.产生浓厚兴趣 catch the eye of sb.引起某人注意 keep up with 跟上 a household name 一个家喻 户晓的名字 speak highly of .高度评价. one-h
3、it wonder 县花一现的歌手、演员等 show off 炫耀 gain popularity 受到欢迎 role model 榜样 be credited to 归功于 deserve to be .当之无愧. 参考句型参考句型 1.be undoubtedly an idol for .毫无疑问是 .的偶像 e.g. The handsome pop star is undoubtedly an idol for teens around he world. 这个帅气的流行歌星毫无疑问是青少年的偶像。 2. balance the acting life with her person
4、al life 平衡好演艺生活和个人生活 e.g. She chooses her roles carefully and works hard to balance her acting life with her personal life. 她仔细地选择角色，努力平衡好自己的工作和生活。 3. have a passion for .对.生强烈的兴趣 e.g. Born into such a musical family, G.E.M had a passion for music when she was a little girl. 邓紫棋出生在这样一个音乐世家，她在很小的时候就对
5、音乐产生了强烈的兴趣。 4.be due to . 归因于. e.g. Kim Soo Hyuns success is due to his serious attitude towards acting. 金秀贤的成功归因于他对待演戏的那股认真劲。 5.He is famous because .他出名是因为. e.g. He is famous because he has got talent for playing basketball 他出名是因为他有打篮球的天赋。 6.He is famous not only for . but also for .他出名不仅是因.更是因为.
6、e.g. He is famous not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect sills in basketball. 他出名不仅是因为他那令人惊叹的身高，更是因为他那完美的篮球技术。 7.Her contribution to society is .她对社会的贡献. e.g. Her contribution to society is showing Chinese culture to the world. 她对社会的贡献是向世界展示中国文化。 8.be fascinated by . .着迷 e.g. In h
7、is childhood, he was fascinated by Bruce Lee, much like other children at his age. 小时候，他与同龄孩子们一一样，对李小龙非常着迷。 习作一习作一 My favorite idol My favourite idol is Ninomiya Kazunari - the member of ARASHI.He has good skin as if he were just 23 years old, but in fact, he is 33 now.Heis good at writing and singi
8、ng, as well as dancing: He has won the award of the Japanese Academy and he is also interested in doing magic tricks. Sometimes he is quiet as an adult and sometimes he is smiling like a child. He is an attractive man and I like him very much. 注：be good at 擅长于， as well as 也 点评:小作者写她的偶像二宫和也，涉及面比较广:年龄
9、、特长、奖项、爱好，读起来文章比较流畅，但 句式简单，如果把简单句变成复合句会更好。比如原文中 He is good at writing and singing, as well as dancing. 可以用 so . that 结构，改成 He is so talented that he is good at writing and singing, as well as dancing.表明他是 一个很有天赋的歌手。 习作二习作二 My favorite idol The public tends to think that Miley Cyrus has a bad influen
10、ce on teenagers because of all those crazy things she has done after leaving the former Disney star title behind. Regardless of what others think, Miley Cyrus is my favorite idol.Aside from the fact that she has a hoarse voice which can be easily distinguished, I like her as a person. Unlike most Ho
11、llywood stars,she is bold, and most importantly, she is true to herself. She sings the songs she wants to sing, even though the theme relates to controversial issues. She does charity, helping many kids either psychologically or financially. Getting rid of her former identity as Hannah Montana, Mile
12、y Cyrus has finally grown up and become a celebrity who has impact on the society, and this makes her my favorite idol. 注：注： 1.regardless of 不管不顾 2.Aside from the fact that she has a hoarse voice which can be easily distinguished, I like her as a person.定语 从句 3.get rid of 摒弃 4.Getting rid of her for
13、mer identity as Hannah Montana, Miley Cyrus has finally grown up and become a celebrity who has impact on the society, and this makes her my favorite idol.定语从句 点评点评: 小作者写这篇名人文章的视角比较独特:没有按一般思 路从这位当红歌星的作品及获得的奖项出发， 而 是另辟蹊径，将 Miley Cyrus 和其他明星的不同处写了出来: She isbold, and most importantly, she is true to he
14、rself.除此之外，她还有更加高贵的品质: Shedoes charity, helping many kids either psychologically or financially.这样，这位歌星为何是作者最喜爱的，就-目 了然了。作者词汇、句型运用流畅得体，可见语言 功底很好。 相关话题范文解析相关话题范文解析 （一）（一） Lin Dan A Super Sports Star Lin Dan, whose nickname is Super Dan, is a famous badminton player of China. Lin Dan has an outstandin
15、g performance in the badminton history. At the age of 27, he won all the major titles in the badminton word. No one in the word has done better than him. Lin Dan is an enthusiastic man, and he is a person full of passion. He puts his heart and soul into his training and contests. He is the kind of p
16、erson who believes in himself. And he will not give up, until he achieves his goals. It is this kind of spirit and hard work that make him a legend in the badminton world. Lin Dan is worthy of the name- -super sports star. 参考译文参考译文 林丹林丹-一位超级体育明星一位超级体育明星 林丹，昵称为“超级丹”，是中国著名的羽毛球运动员。林丹在羽毛球历史上有着出色的表现。在他 2
17、7 岁时，他就赢得了羽毛球世界里的全部主要头衔。世界上没有哪个人能比他更优秀的了。 林丹是一个非常热情的人，同时，他也是一 一个充满激情的人。 他会全身心地投入到训练和比赛中。 他是那种一一直坚信自己的人。不实现目标，绝不轻言放弃。正是这种精神和他的刻苦，让他成了羽毛球 世界里的传奇人物。 林丹不愧为超级体育明星。 亮点词汇亮点词汇 nickname 昵称 outstanding 卓越的;出众的 passion 漱情 achieve ones goal 实现某人的目标 spirit 精神 legend .传奇 出彩句型出彩句型 whose nick name is. . 昵称为. He has
18、 an outstanding performance.他有着出色的表现。 He puts his heart and soul n.他全身心投入到. He will not give up, until.他不会放弃，直到. It is. that.正是. . 高分点评高分点评 本文主要围绕super 这一字眼展开， 以对林丹性格特点的详细描写，来突出他的卓越之处。本文多 处使用了定语从句，如 whose 引导的定语从句和 who 引导的定语从句，还运用了强调句“It s.at.使文章变化 多样、 精彩绝伦。 （二）（二） A Pop Singer Justin Bieber, a Canad
19、ian pop singer and actor, was born on March 1st, 1994. He lives in the U.S.A. now. He has a handsome look. He has a deep love for music. When he was eight years old, he could play the guitar and drum. At that time, he often played the guitar in the street, which attracted many passers-by. Now he is
20、a real superstar, who is popular all around the world. A lot of teenage fans are obsessed with him. One reason is that his songs are very positive, encouraging people not to give up easily. He has a great talent in music. 1 hope he can do better in the future. 参考译文参考译文 一位流行歌手一位流行歌手 贾斯汀.比伯，一位加拿大流行歌手和
21、演员，出生于 1994 年 3 月 1 日。他现在居住在美国。他有着英俊 的外表。 他很热爱音乐。他八岁的时候，就能弹吉他和打鼓。那时候，他经常在街上弹吉他，吸引了很多路人。 现在他是一个真正的超级明星，在全世界都很受欢迎。很多青少年粉丝迷恋他。其中一个原因是他的歌很 积极，鼓励人们不要轻易放弃。 他在音乐上很有天赋。我希望他以后能做得更好。 亮点词汇亮点词汇 handsome 英俊的 passer-by 路人;行人 positive 积极的 encourage 鼓励 出彩句型出彩句型 He has a. look.他有.的外表。 He has a deep love fr.他很热爱. At
22、that time.,.在那时，. . is/are obsessed with. 对.迷恋. One reason is that.一个原因是. 高分点评高分点评 本文从贾斯汀.比伯的基本概况到音乐之路依次展开，通过连接词“at that time等的使用，使得文章起承 转合顺畅自然。作者将同位语、分析结构和定语糅合使用，既使表达简练，又使句子富于变化。如文章的 第一句中同位语 a Canadian pop singer and actor和 who 引导的定语从句结合使用，清晰明了地传递了作者 的意思，非常精彩。 书面表书面表达满分必背达满分必背 （一）（一） Superstar and
23、I In my heart, G.EM Tang is a superstar. She is my favourite singer who has a really amazing voice. She started her career when she was only sixteen years old - a year younger than I am now! She did her gigs when she was nineteen- the time when most of us are struggling for the University Entrance E
24、xamination. She has pursued her dream with overspread rumor and doubts for 9 years till now. She ever cried, she ever tried to explain,but she never stopped. Now she has the best attitude to those rumors: I will prove myself with my music. As far as I am concerned, it is very amazing to achieve such
25、 great success in music at such a young age. Moreover, her attitude to face all the misunderstandings from others is what I can learn from. We are growing day by day, all of us, and we must try to face all kinds of things, including the misunderstandings. What should we do then? Maybe we should lear
26、n from G.E.M and do what we should do to prove ourselves. （二）（二） My favourite star There are many excellent stars in various fields at home and abroad, for example, ZhouXun in film industry, Mo Yan in literature, and Bolt in the sports circles. My favorite star is Zhou Xun. who is an outstanding act
27、ress. Zhou Xun liked watching movies since she was a little girl. Her father worked in a cinema, which offered her the opportunity to have aces to movies. Maybe her talent has been developed since then Over the two decades Zhou Xun has performed in TV and movies Her acting is mature day after day. b
28、ringing her lots of awards. Now she has become one of the iconic actresses in China. Besides, she devotes herself in philanthropy and environmental protection. Zhou Xun calls on everyone to live a low-carbon life to keep a green and beautiful planet. I like her because of her excellent performing as well as her personality.