1、 书面表达书面表达专题专题 江苏省南京市联合体2020年中考二模英语试题 六、书面表达 76.请根择校刊English Garden中Have Your Say栏目的征稿要求,以Love around me为题, 用英语一篇短文,发表你的想法。 Welcome to Have Your Say As everybody knows, love makes the world go around. So this week, I want your voice about the topic Love around me。 What do you think of love in your da
2、ily life? Can you give us some examples about love around you? What are you going to show you your love to others? Im sure that you have a lot to say. Looking forward to hearing from you soon! 注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥; 2. 词数 80左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数; 3. 文中不得提及有关考生的个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Im glad to share my ide
3、as about the topic Love around me. As everybody knows, love makes the world go around. _ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】例文： Im glad to share my ideas about the topic “Love around me”. As everybody knows, love makes the world go around. There is plenty of love around me. My parents love me. They take good care of me.
4、 My teachers and classmates bring love to me. They try their best to help me when Im in trouble. I feel very happy and thankful when I get love from them. Last term, My English was poor and I failed to my English exam, I am very sad, I lost confidence in English, but my English teacher patiently com
5、forted me and encouraged me. She used his spare time to help me with my English. Last week, I got the first place in the English exam. I am very grateful to my English teacher. It is her love that has influenced me and restored my confidence. Im going to study harder to make her satisfied and give m
6、y classmates a helping hand when they need me. Love is like the sun, it makes me feel warm and happy. Love is not only around me but also around everyone. I believe that our world will become more beautiful and more peaceful if everyone loves each other. 【解析】 【详解】 1. 题干解读： 文章是一篇话题作文。 主要是以“Love aroun
7、d me”为主题展开描写， 描写身边的一些能够体现出爱的事情来衬托主题， 要按照题目中所给的要求描写， 要注意语 言的连贯性和合理性。 2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段总的描写身边充满了爱，有父母的爱，也有老师同 学的爱；第二段具体的描写一件事情，突出老师的爱，进一步的点明主题；第三段总结爱就 像太阳，给了我们温暖和快乐，期待每个人都能献出一点爱，让世界变的更加美好。整个文 章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，行文流畅，意思易懂。 3. 高分亮点： 短语： plenty of； take good care of； try ones best to do； be in trouble；
8、help sb with； not onlybut also。 句型：and 引导的并列句；when 引导的时间状语从句；that引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件 状语从句。 江苏省南京市玄武区2020年中考二模英语试题 六、书面表达六、书面表达 76. 日前，中共中央、国务院印发关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见 。中 学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。 根据所给标题和 下图内容，就家务劳动发表自己的观点，需要包括： Do you agree with the boys words? Do you often do housework? What do yo
9、u usually do? Should young students learn to do housework? List at least two reasons to support your ideas. 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺,意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数 80 左右。 Should Young Students Learn to Do Housework? As you can see in the picture, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】例文： Should Young Students Learn to
10、Do Housework? As you can see in the picture, a little boy who is doing housework says to his mother, could you pay more? Obviously, he regards housework as a way to make money. I dont agree with his words. I think its our responsibility to do housework. Teenagers should learn to do housework activel
11、y. I often help my parents do housework. At home, I usually clean the room, do the laundry and make my bed. Sometimes I cook for my family. Its very good to do chores. Firstly, to do some housework can make us independent, we cant depend on others all our life. So, we should learn how to do some hou
12、sework. Secondly, it can keep us healthy and strong. Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. Finally, to do housework can share our parents work. They must be happy if we can help them. So I think young students should learn how to do housework. 【解析】 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇图画作文写
13、作，根据图片中的内容引发深思，思考“青少 年到底应不应该学做家务”。结合材料要点可知，本文需要对图画中内容进行分析，阐述自 己的观点； 列举自己经常做得家务劳动； 最后阐述自己关于“青少年应不应该做家务”的观 点，并列举至少两条的原因来支持自己的观点。 2.写作指导：本文主题为“年轻的学生应不应该学习做家务”，写作时要明确自己的观点： 应该或不应该；文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主，叙述自己的家务劳动经历，阐述自己的 观点；文章写作时注意要点齐全、逻辑通顺，条理清晰，使读者一目了然。 江苏省南京市秦淮区2020年中考二模英语试题 六、书面表达（满分六、书面表达（满分 15 分）分） 34 （15
14、 分）自 7 月 1 日起，南京市将执行江苏省电动自行车安全条例 ，未戴头盔骑 乘电动自行车将属于交通违法行为 请你根据下面的调查数据和文字提示， 以 Helmet is important 为题，用英语写一篇短文 调查数据 2019 年南京市电动自行车交通事故死亡原因分析 *正确佩戴头盔的骑乘人员在交通事故中无一死亡 规定 未戴头盔将被警告或罚款 20 至 50 元 观点 针对新条例谈谈你的看法 注意： 1参考词汇：颅脑受损 brain damage； 死亡原因 death cause； 2文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 3语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4词数 80 左右，
15、开头已给出，不计入总词数 Helmet is important! From 1 July， 2020， people in Nanjing must wear helmets when they ride ebicycles _ 【分析】高分句型一： Its necessary for everyone to wear helmets when riding ebicycles 骑电动自行车时每 个人都必须戴头盔 句子中 Its necessary for sb to do sth 表示对某人来说做某事是必须的 高分句型二： People will wear helmets in order
16、 to avoid being punished人们会戴头盔以避免受到惩 罚句子中 avoid doing sth 表示避免做某事 【解答】From 1 July， 2020， people in Nanjing must wear helmets when they ride e bicycles Otherwise， they will be warned or fined 20 to 50 yuan （规定） According to a survey on the death causes of people who died from ebike accidents， 81.6 pe
17、rcent of them died because of brain damage Among them， 95 percent didnt wear helmets On the other hand， none of those who wore helmets properly died We should learn a lesson from the numbers Its necessary for everyone to wear helmets when riding e bicycles 【高分句型一】 （调查数据） In my opinion， it is respons
18、ible and wise of Nanjing Government to carry out this new traffic rule （观点） People will wear helmets in order to avoid being punished In this way， more people will be protected （希望） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语 和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务 江苏省南京市鼓楼区2020年中考二模英语试题 六、书面表达六、书面表达 76. 假如你是阳光中学的李红，
19、在学校网站上看到下面这则公告。请你根据公告内容， 用英语写一封邮件。 Weekend Plans Needed Some foreign students will arrive at our school. They will stay in our school for a week. Wed like you to make a plan for their weekend. We hope the plan will help them make friends and know more about Nanjing and the local culture. We are look
20、ing forward to your wonderful ideas. Please email Linda at lindali163. com. 注意： 1、内容覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 2、词数 80 左右(邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。 3、文中不得提及有关考生的个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Dear Madam, I am writing to offer my plan for the foreign students weekend._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Hong 【答案】例文： Dear Mada
21、m, I am writing to offer my plan for the foreign students weekend. On Saturday, they can visit the landmark buildings in Nanjing under the guidance of their local classmates, such as Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum and Master Templ, which have a strong cultural and historical atmosphere. It plays an important
22、 role in helping them understand the culture of Nanjing. After knowing the local environment, the school can hold a Sino foreign student exchange meeting on Sunday. During the meeting, students can watch the documentary about Nanjing. Local students should actively communicate with foreign students.
23、 On Sunday night, a bonfire party will be held at school. This is a good way to promote friendly exchanges and enhance friendship between Chinese and foreign students. Thank you for your reading. I hope my plan can be adopted. Yours sincerely, Li Hong 【解析】 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信文写作，要注意书信的基本格式。题目要求为来校交 流
24、的外国学生制定一个周末计划，以帮助他们了解南京并结交中国朋友。为此，我们可以将 计划分为两部分， 一段引导外国学生了解南京的自然风景及人文； 一段用于促进中外学生的 友好交流、增进友谊。 2.本文主题为“为外国学生制定周末计划”；文章时态应以一般现在时或一般将来时为主， 人称为第三人称复数，注意主谓一致问题；文章应根据题目要点分段叙述，一是了解南京， 二是结交朋友；写作时要注意语句通顺，层次清晰，使读者一目了然。 江苏省南京市建邺区2020年中考二模英语试题 书面表达书面表达 76.初三中考最后复习阶段，同学们要学会调节并且劳逸结合，可以积极参加一些有意义的 活动来丰富自己的生活。假定你是李磊
25、，你的朋友 Frank 想邀请你与他共度周末，请认真 阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的想法用英语问复。 To: L From: FrankE Subject: Weekend Activities Dear Li Lei, Im happy to hear you have finished your exam. If you arent busy, would you like to stay at my place this weekend? While youre here, the Environment Club I belong to needs some volunteer
26、s. We could either help pick up litter along the river or plant trees in a park for a few hours. Which activity would you prefer? Why? We have to wear old clothes and boots for these kinds of activities. I have an extra pair of boots if you want to borrow them. What else do you want to do during you
27、r stay? Best wishes, Frank 注意： 1.词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Dear Frank, Thanks for your invitation for this weekend._ _ _ _ _ _ _ I am looking forward to this weekend! All the best, Li Lei 【答案】Dear Frank, Thanks for your invitation for this week
28、end. I am very glad to have the opportunity to participate in environmental protection activities. I have been hoping to take part in an activity to make contributions to protecting the environment. I prefer to plant trees in the park, because trees provide not only fresh air but also protect agains
29、t wind and sand. I have some old clothes, so I dont have to use yours.I want to go to visit the old people in the nursing home, talking with them during my stay. I am looking forward to this weekend! All the best, Li Lei 【解析】 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时先表示我 很高兴参加保护环境的活动；第二段介绍更喜欢在公园种树；最后我期盼这个周末。 2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，介 绍我喜欢在公园种树的原因，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交 替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点： 短语：participate in；take part in；make contributions to ; prefer to；protect against; look forward to。 句型：because引导的原因状语从句；so连接的并列复合句。