1、书面表达书面表达专题专题 新吴区新城中学、梅里中学期中考试 九、书面表达九、书面表达 （本大题共 10 分） 假如你是李华，将参加今年暑期的澳大利亚悉尼新南威尔士语言学校的游学活动（study tour）, 该项目 的负责人 John 给你发来了封电子邮件征询你对此次游学活动的想法和建议。请阅读以下信息，并回复一封 电子邮件。 注意事项：注意事项： 1. 文章所写内容必须包括邮件中的问题所涉及的所有信息。 2. 文章要求语意通顺，条理清楚，书写规范，不能出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 3. 文章词数在 100 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 注意事项：注意事项： 1. 文章所写内容必须
2、包括邮件中的问题所涉及的所有信息。 2. 文章要求语意通顺，条理清楚，书写规范，不能出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 3. 文章词数在 90 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, Im glad to receive your email and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in _ _ _ _ _ _ Im really looking forward to this study tour! Many thanks, Li Ming 九、书面表达 Dear Li Hua, Were glad
3、 to know youre coming to our school for your study tour this summer holiday. Here are two host families for you to choose to live in: The Green familyThe Green family an old couple, no children, two dogs a flat, in the centre of Sydney Wi-fi 350 pounds The Black familyThe Black family a middle-aged
4、couple, a junior school boy, a primary school girl a house, a little far from Sydney a garden 230 pounds 1.Which host family would you like to choose? Why? (2-3 points) 2.We can offer you a buddy during your stay at our school. What do you expect him/her to do to help you? (1-2 points) 3.What would
5、you like to do at weekends? Why? (1-2 points) Hope to hear from you soon! John Dear Sir/Madam, Im glad to receive your email and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in the Green family. The old couple have no children but two dogs, so they will have more time to communicate with me in E
6、nglish and I can play with their pets as well. Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so its easy for me to go around. (I can also use the Wi-fi to keep in touch with my parents. My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.) Im lucky to have a buddy during my stay at your school. I expect him/her to
7、 help me with my problems in my study. I can chat with him/her in English to improve my speaking skills. I love history so I want to visit some places of interest at the weekend. Im also curious about the local food and I want to have a taste. Im really looking forward to this study tour! Many thank
8、s, Li Ming 无锡市东林中学2019-2020 九年级上 期中试卷 九、 书面表达 （本大题共 15 分） 假设你叫王琳， 你校将开展“最美青年”评选活动， 你班决定推选 Sandy 参 加本次评选， 你 草拟了介绍 Sandy 的思维导图，请根据下图用英文写一封推荐信。 Personalities (active, lively.) Hobbies (drawing, win high praise.) used to . ( practice hard , never lose heart . ) be good at . (volleyball, try out for .) 注
9、意事项： 1.推荐信内容须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.思维导图中括号部分非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3.词数在 90 个左右，推荐信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4.推荐信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息； 5.推荐信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 Dear Sir or Madam, We are writing to recommend Sandy in our class as The Most Beautiful Youth in our school. We think Sandy is the most suitable person for th
10、is award. We hope that you agree with us. Yours sincerely, Wang Lin 答案：略。 无锡市天一实验学校九年级上学期期中考试 九、书面表达 今天校报记者 Sandy 接到了一封来自初一新生们从小学到初中，角色无法一下子转变过 来，不知道如何 处理一些矛盾。 假如你是校报记者 Sandy， 请根据 Nancy 的来信， 结合自 己的心得体会， 分享成功经验， 帮助 Nancy 解决问题。 Dear Sandy, You know I am new here. I find it hard for me to get along wel
11、l with my classmates. When I have trouble with my study, I dont know how to get help. I really want to be part of the class. Would you please give me some advice? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Nancy 注意：1.信的内容自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合情境； 2. 词数在 90 个左右，邮件首尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Nancy, Good luck with e
12、verything! Yours, Nancy 【答案】 Im sorry to hear that you have some problems. Dont be shy. Students here are easy to get along with.You should chat with them about school lives and they are willing to be good listeners. You should smile often and take an active in activities in class. No matter what pr
13、oblems you have ,they are always ready to help you. Also, you can go to the teachers to ask for help if you have difficulty in study. I hope my advice is worth taking and you will enjoy you school life here! 【解析】 这是一篇开放性的写作， 主要是结合书信内容来进行回复， 注意首尾的客套句， 注意拼写 和语法。注意要解决信中提出的问题。 无锡市河埒中学期中测试卷 九、书面表达(本大题共 1
14、5 分) 青少年杂志( Teens Magazine)开设了新专栏 Hear From You，专栏收录国内外青少年 的信件，给青少年们提供了互相交流的机会。下面就是本月刊登的一封信，假设你是王玲， 请你阅读信件，并进行回复。 My dear friend My name is Nora. I am a Grade 9 student from the USA. I have a lot of hobbies, such as playing volleyball reading books and drawing pictures. My favourite colour is yellow
15、 because it represents wisdom and success. My hero is Lang Ping because she is hard-working and never gives up. Recently, she has led her team to many achievements. What about you? Please tell me something about you, such as your hobbies, your favourite colour and your hero. I have few friends and I
16、 feel lonely sometimes. So Im glad to have the chance to make friends with you. Moreover, my parents dont allow me to spend too much time playing volleyball. But I cant imagine my life without it. I dont know how to solve the problems. Can you offer me some advice? Hope to hear from you soon Best wi
17、shes Nora 1.文章内容须根据写作要点自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合语境; 注意事项: 2.词数 90 个左右，信件的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数 3.文章中不得出现真实的人名，班名，校名 4.信件内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置 Dear Nora, Thank you very much for your letter. And I am glad to make friends with you. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Im looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Wang Ling 答案略 江阴市南菁教育集
18、团期中英语英语试题 一、书面表达 假设你叫李文，是无锡阳光中学（Wuxi Sunshine Middle School）的一名学生。今天暑期， 你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，此次会议的主题是 A Green World。你 草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。 注意事项： 1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中包括部分非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在 90 个左右； 4. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 解答： 【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen! My name is Li Wen. Im a
19、 student of Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. This year, I am fifteen years old. China has made its own efforts for the green world. Many factories have net the discharge standards. We have made use of many new energy sources. For example: wind, solar and hydroelectric power. What should we do as middle
20、school students? First of all, we should turn off the lights in time. Secondly, when we take a shower, we should save water. Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If so, we have made our due efforts for environmental protection. 【解析】 这是一篇材料作文，根据李文的发言流程图写一篇英文发言
21、稿。主题是 A Green World。因 为今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，主要从介绍自己、中国为 “绿色世界”已经做的和“我”是怎样做得。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时和现在完成 时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免 使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯， 注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密， 符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 无锡市锡北片期中考试英语试题 八、书面表达（本大题共 15 分） 假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友 Dav
22、id 给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中两 年多来的学习情况和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的电子邮件，根据 信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。 To： From: Subject:School life Dear Su Hua, Glad to hear youre going to graduate from middle school. Im interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things? Wha
23、t do you like best about your school life? Whats the biggest problem as a middle school student? Who has helped you most? And why? Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not? I look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, David 注意： 1. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺
24、； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear David, Thank you so much for your email. Im very happy to tell you about my school life. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ How about your school life? Write to me soon. Best wishes, Su Hua 八、书面表达 One possible version： Dear David, Thank you so much for your email. Im very happy to tell
25、 you about my school life. I like the Football Club best because I have made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, its an excellent chance to learn team spirit. However, Ive also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork an
26、d my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, So she is the person who has helped me most in middle school. In all, I enjoy my school life because its colourful and meaningful. (90 words) How about your school life? Write to me soon. Best wishes, Su Hua （一）评分原则： 1
27、. 本题总分为 15 分，按 5 个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来 衡量， 确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 邮件须回复对方提出的 6 个问题，回复可用不同方式表达，补充信息须符合情境。 4. 内容要点遗漏、句子语法结构错误、时态、语态误用，均为大错。其他错误（如 冠词、 介词、拼写、标点等方面的错误）均为小错。3 处小错相当于 1 处大错。相同的错误，只 扣 1 次。 5. 词数少于 80 或多于 100 的，从总分中减去 1 分。 （二）各档次的给分要求： 档 次 得 分 错 误 情 况 第一档 1513 分 无大错，或只有小错 1
28、2 处 第二档 1210 分 大错 12 处 第三档 97 分 大错 34 处 第四档 64 分 仅正确写出与内容要求相关的 12 个句子 第五档 31 分 只写出与内容相关的个别词语 0 分 白卷或通篇文不对题，不知所云 无锡市南长实验、侨谊教育集团期中英语试题 九九、书面表达、书面表达 （本大题共 15 分） 某英语报社正在就“The person who I admire most”为题进行征文比赛。假设你的叔叔对 你的学习生活影响非常大，你非常钦佩你的叔叔 Mike。请你根据表格提供的有关叔叔的信 息和要求写一篇文章向该报社投稿。 注意：1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思
29、连贯； 2. 省略号处作适当发挥； 3. 词数 90 个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The person who I admire most I would like to talk about my Uncle Mike who I admire most. _ _ _ _ 九、书面表达九、书面表达 (本大题共 15 分) The person who I admire most I would like to talk about my Uncle Mike who I admire most. He is a writer. He is in his thirties. He ha
30、s many strong qualities. He is always organized and keeps everything in order. He works hard and keeps writing every day. Sometimes he stays up late. He is glad to help others and often does extra work for neighbours. His favourite colour is red, because he thinks red represents power and strong fee
31、lings. Wearing red makes it easier to take action. When something worries me, I often go to him. He often listens to me and gives me some advice. (90 words) 无锡市澄西片期中考试英语试题 九书面表达（本大题共 15 分） 假如你是李莉， 你的英语老师陈老师今天在黑板上留下了几个问题， 请认真阅读并根据 问题内容给老师写一个回复。 1. How much time do you spend on English homework every
32、day? 职业 作家 年龄 三十几岁 品质 有条理 做事有规划，物品摆放井井有条 勤奋 坚持每日写作，偶尔熬夜 乐于助人 经常为邻居做额外的工作 最爱的颜色 红色 象征着. 对我的帮助 . (举例说明) 2. Do you have difficulty doing your daily English homework? 3. Do you often do English homework first? Why? 4. Do you have time to read English books every day? 5. Whats your suggestions for your E
33、nglish teacher about English homework?(作业 内容至少两条) 注意：1.词数 90 左右，开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数; 2.回复须包括所有问题的要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺; 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Mr. Chen, Im glad that youve asked us some questions about English homework. _ Yours Sincerely, LiLi 略 无锡江阴市华士片期中考试英语试题 九、书面表达九、书面表达 （本大题共 15 分） 时下越来越多的人使用智能手机
34、（smart phone）。智能手机给我们生活带来便利的同 时，也产生许多不好的影响。我们身边有很多“低头族（phubbers）”。请根据所给要点信 息，写一篇短文告诫身边的同学。 What advantages(优势) and disadvantages have smart phones brought us? Tell us one of your unhappy experiences about using smart phones. What will you do with your own smart phone? 要求：1词数 90 左右。题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2
35、所写内容必须包括所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。 3不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Refuse to be phubbers More and more people are using smart-phones nowadays. _ _ _ _ 九、书面表达九、书面表达 One possible version: Refuse to be phubbers More and more people are using smart phones. Smart phones are helpful to our lives. We can use them to rea
36、d news, shop online and so on. But some of us play with them too often. It has caused bad effects on us. Phubbers can be seen here and there. One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smart phone while walking. A car nearly hit me. How terrible! I wont do it any more. I wont spend much time on smart phones because its bad for my health and study. I will use my smart phone wisely and try not to be phubbers. (96 words)