1、WritingWrite a letter of advice,Unit 1 Teenage Life,栏目索引,写 作 指 导,建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能 是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理 由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是 “三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体为： 第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自
2、己，注意语气。 第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具 体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。 第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。,话 题 词 汇,feedback n 反馈 suggestion n. 建议 proposal n. 建议 venture v. 冒昧做某事 beneficial adj. 有益的 advise v. 建议 suggest v. 建议 recommend v. 推荐，劝告 wise adj. 明智的,话 题 句 式,1段首常用语 (1)I am writing to expre
3、ss my views concerning. (2)You have asked for my advice about.and I will try to make some suggestions. 2表达“建议”常用语 (1)I think the most suitable.for you is. (2)I would like to suggest that. (3)Youd better./Its better to. (4)As far as I am concerned./In my opinion.,(5)For one thing., for another. (6)If
4、 I were you, I would. (7)It seems to me that you could. 3段尾常用语 (1)I think it would be more beneficial if you could. (2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. (3)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. (4)I will be more than happy to see impro
5、vements in this regard. (5)I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.,典 例 展 示,为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。 假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同 学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影 响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1表示理解并给予安慰； 2提出建议并说明理由。,注意： 1词数100个左右； 2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3信的开头与
6、结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n脾气，情绪,Step One审题谋篇,1控制你的脾气_ 2体育锻炼 _ 3有效的 _ 4去除 _ 5保持乐观 _ 6积极的生活态度 _,control your temper,Step Two词汇运用,physical exercise,effective,get rid of,remain optimistic about,a positive attitude towards life,1完成句子 最重要的是学会控制你的脾气 The most important thing is _ _ _ _ _ _. 你不可能做或者说出你会后悔
7、的事。 You may not do or say _ _ _.,to,Step Three句式表达,learn,to,control,your,temper,anything,youll,regret,事实情况是人人都会有这样的一段时期，在这期间事事不顺，因此 你不必担心过多。 _ _ is that everyone will have one of those periods _ _ _ _ _ _ _，so you dont have to worry much.,The,truth,when,things,seem,to,be,going,wrong,2句式升级 用so that/i
8、n order that合并句和。 The most important thing is to learn to control your temper _ you may not do or say anything youll regret. 把句用it改写成主语从句。 _ everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you dont have to worry much.,so that/in order that,It is true that,Step Four连句成篇,
9、First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second，go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third，remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours， Jamie,